I have pretty well finished our promotional flyer for our upcoming summer outreach. We do a three night “Kids’ Adventure.” This is a very high energy, fast paced event and the kids in the area really look forward to it. This year, we’ve added more prizes, more slime, and a better set (hopefully) than ever before! All that is great, but it isn’t worth anything if nobody shows up. So, tell me, what do you think of this flyer? I really want honest opinions here, so don’t be afraid to hurt my feelings. I know there are things that can be better, that’s why I’m asking you in the first place.
Some things to jump-start your brain. What can I do in the middle to utilize some of that space? A hot air balloon? If I added some slime on a couple of the buildings in the skyline, would that look better or worse? In just a minute, do you get the details you need to attend the event, or are they lost in everything else? And if anyone from the church is reading this, I know the dates are wrong. I’ll fix that in the final edit.
Thanks for the help!